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Doors by ~aoitenshi14:iconaoitenshi14:



I woke up at 3 in the morning, but I could never go back to sleep.

I looked around the dark bedroom, eyes wide open, not seeing anything but the shadows, and the occasional flash of lightning that seeped through the cracks in the curtains.

I looked down. My feet were pointing at the door.

Unable to go to sleep, I tossed and turned. Finally giving up, I lay down, motionless, on my makeshift bed, looking around the wonder that used to be a room. The darkness seemed to transform it into something else.

I fix my eyes on something--anything, because maybe, just maybe, it would help me go back to sleep.

My eyes fall upon the door.

The darkness seemed to make it grow bigger, bigger, BIGGER.

I struggled to take my eyes off it. The darkness does strange things to your eyes. Finally, I was able to look away, into a wall.

A sudden, creeping darkness covered the wall I was looking at.

It was the door, eating up everything in the room.
A dark door. It would not give up.

I closed my eyes, and let the door take me wherever it can.
©2008 ~aoitenshi14
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When I was in the fourth grade, my classmate told me that you'd die in your sleep if you slept with your feet pointing to a door.

It took me weeks before I finally slept without worrying where my feet were pointing.

I guess it's part of being a Filipino, superstitions, and all.

You're not really supposed to read it since it's just short and doesn't even make sense, I'm just putting it up here just in case I need something to start with.

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~Aspidiske:iconAspidiske: May 5, 2008, 6:13:31 AM
That's why I don't like superstitions. :P

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Boys Do Fall in Love - Robin Gibb :dance:
~gelala:icongelala: May 5, 2008, 2:42:04 PM
waah. i liked that. but i didn't know about THAT superstition!! really?! wooow... and here i am, almost always sleeping with my feet pointing to the door... (TT.TT)
but i like the imagery... it's good... i can "see" what the person's seeing.. X3

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nyar...
blue is blue,and green is green,
but what of everything else in between?

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eat your heart out with this silver spoon...